The English Story

[HERO-911]

i have a good idea :5flowerfa
its about creating a story........by english of course
& i took the idea from (laplac)....& we will
translate it
i mean that we'll write the story by english
thats all
wish to be a nice story

;):p:5bouncy::cool::rolleyes::):5bowtie::5headset: :o
i'll start now


once upon a time.........

[zozi485]

its good idea and it will enrich the english section
i saw a rat ...........

[HERO-911]

i tried to kill him
but.........

[crimzon red]

.?im not really sure i follow, are we making up a story
if so; here goes


it was as fat as a cat

[doosher]

thanks for the very nice topic
to make use of it.. i suggest if you agree that i correct the mistakes copying the whole story but with the corrections..
if you agree and waiting for your opinions
wish you all the best

[crimzon red]

: thanks for the very nice topic
to make use of it.. i suggest if you agree that i correct the mistakes copying the whole story but with the corrections..
if you agree and waiting for your opinions
wish you all the best
I'm sorry , I'm afraid i didn't quite catch your meaning.
Agree to what exactly? Editing the story once it's finished you mean? is it going to finish? I think this is a game so I'm kind of hoping it going to go on for a while.
A long while that is :5bouncy:

[doosher]

i didnt mean edit it.. but i noticed some either spelling or structure or gramatical mistakes and i was suggesting that , to have a real benefit of the story, that someone would correct the mistakes
hope my point is clear now:)
all the best

[HERO-911]

to crimzon
please restart the story
& remove all this
thanx

[crimzon red]

ليه بس يا هيرو ، هي وحشه؟:D :eek:

*على العموم ممكن نبدأ من جديد من غير ما نحذف، زي ما بنعمل في العاب كتير

[HERO-911]

ok im with u
lets start again

one day i saw a girl....

[™M@fia]

it was very ugly
but.........

[doosher]

one day i saw a girl
SHE was very ugly
but.........

SHE had very long soft hair!!

and because of that.........

[Hoobastank]

I tried to ignore her , but

[™M@fia]

i couldn"t because.............

[HERO-911]

she was walking with a beautiful girl
&suddenly

[™M@fia]

she looked at me and i

[Hoobastank]

i kissed her, and then

[moodyelgamal]

She slapped me on my face

[™M@fia]

i kissed her again , so she......

[crimzon red]

so she called the cops

[zozi485]

then i escaped to my car

[HERO-911]

but they were following me
&

[Hoobastank]

i made an accident, then i

[™M@fia]

found that girl in front of me

[Marilyn Manson]

i say why do u do that ....she say

[Hoobastank]

i hate men , they are all the same , i was

[BRUTALITY]

love some one and he leaves me
cuz

[Hoobastank]

love some one and he leaves me
cuz

sorry wrong sentence , the correct one is
i was in love with someone , and he left me because

anyway lets continue
----------------------------

he's selfish, then i tired to change her mind , and

[™M@fia]

i was very romantic, and he just

[HERO-911]

was in love with anthor girl
& he told me.........

[hiphat]

and I went crazy.......i realized all men are the same .....they are all disloyal and inconsiderate.......... yes this is the bitter reality and since then i hated them....they are the most vicious enemy

[™M@fia]

he said : try me i'm different

[Hoobastank]

she said : no way , then i returned to home and

[crimzon red]

قلبتوها ( سوب اوبرا ) ليه يا جماعة :D

, and instead of studying as i was supposed to do, i sat there day dreaming of her.
Lost in thought as i was, it took me a moment to hear; the loud banging on the front door!.

[Star Car]

...Now, i have an idea
...i will kill her and i will kill my self
...with a modern gun

boooooooooooo.....booooooooooooo

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

THE END

CAST
moodyelgamal
doosher
zizo485
marilyn
BRUTALITY
HERO-911
hiphat
Mafia Game
Hoobastank2
crimzon red
Star Car
www.paramount.com (http://www.paramount.com)

[Hoobastank]

Perfect ending :p

all right , let begin a new story
.......................................



Once upon a time , there was a little village .......

[Star Car]

it was a very bad village. I decided to burn it

[crimzon red]

هو انا في منتدى الرعب ولا ايه؟ فيه ايه يا جماعه :rolleyes:

[™M@fia]

صحيح ياشباب عاوزين نهايات هاديه كدا
so we all day
قصه هاديه ياشباب
let's start
one day i wasn't in my mode ,cuz my girl friend

[hiphat]

betrayed me......... i saw her with another boy ......that drove me crazy

[Hoobastank]

then i went to see my bestfriend , then we began

[hiphat]

to do lots of things........ i told him about my girl friend so he said

[Star Car]

she is stupid and you are the best

[™M@fia]

suddenly, my girl friend called me , and she said

[chessmaster]

please fogive me i knew i was foolish and you are the best thing in my life

[chessmaster]

please don't leave me i can't live without you"she said. but i looked to the mirror and saw how fool i was so i decide to .................................................. .

[chessmaster]

leave to another town .so i went to the station to book aticket but i found the station closed so i decided to go back home and while i was going back i saw agirl she was ugly but she has along soft hair so i decided to kiss her and .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

[Star Car]

and i canceled this bad idea and i slapped her

[chessmaster]

she was amazed of what i have done so she looked at me and cried at first then she began to scream

[Star Car]

and i slapped her again

[HERO-911]

but my conscience told me that i must go to her again

[hiphat]

and tell her u r the ugliest girl i have ever seen in my life

[hiphat]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

[Star Car]

and i did it and i slapped her again and again. She was crying and i was very angry and i slapped her so many times with no respect

[hiphat]

suddenly , her boyfried appeared among the amazed crowds who gathered around me wondering what's happening....... gosh...! he was uglier than her but huge and muscular.........opps i realized it's the end ....my end

[HERO-911]

so i jumed into my car & began to move.........but

[crimzon red]

but police cars barricaded the road and i so i was apprehended and charged with assault
Needless to say, i spent endless hours in jail; thinking on the consequences of acting like a spoilt brat and lashing out on people
the end

:cool: :D

*ما تخفوا شوية من افلام الرعب الي بتشوفوها.. كله ضرب في ضرب؟ :p

[mohammed2050]

OK let us start anew one

once upon a time............

[crimzon red]

in a planet far far away from earth
..........

[™M@fia]

there was another life

[mohammed2050]

and we were there

[HERO-911]

in a strange plant...called aliens fate
we found a...............

[HERO-911]

we found a strange & a big alien
he's red & very tall & he called .........

[mohammed2050]

Oscar and he looks frendly but ...........v

[crimzon red]

but how friendly can alien be i ask u
!
Planet Alien Fate? why am i here? and where is everyone else
is it to be only oscar and i
?
But how do i know his names Oscar? Can i talk to aliens
?
I'm not an alien myself am I
?!!!!! :eek:

[mohammed2050]

Who told you that you are not an alien

OK you are not

after that I wake up and I went to my school Then........................v

[HERO-911]

then i saw a shadow
looks like oscar shadow
then i looked behind
i found nothing

[hiphat]

but i was sure i saw it......i felt slightly scared...there was something abnormal..............i was feeling it ..it is always behind me...watching me......i tried to escape...but in vain..it was always behind me
i reached home ..i was shivering with fear...gosh!that was the most frightening situation i've ever experienced throughout my life
i entered my own room and closed the door behind me...i felt the shadow is becoming darker and larger
i cautiously srartd to turn back my head and............................suddenly..

[mohammed2050]

I heard a some thing from my clost

yes I am sure i heard it and it said

I am coming to take you

but I could move and i went to open it and then i found no thing

then i phoned my friend

[HERO-911]

then i found my self shaking & scared
i changed my mind
then......................
OUCH !!!!0

[mashakel]

then i decided to leave my house ... and run . run . run

thnx 4 that good one " hero "

[mohammed2050]

while I was runnind , I saw someone coming to me

Then..................

[HERO-911]

he asked me about the time
but he looks suspicious
then
...............
not at all mashakel
its nothing beside ur works

[mohammed2050]

Then I went to my friend

But I did not find him there

After that I went to............................v

[HERO-911]

i went to a restaurant.....but while that
i found this man out side & looking to me with a devils eyes
but.........there was
something else

[mohammed2050]

Yes I sure It looked like a huge black dog

I went out of the restaurant to see what was it but .........................................v

[HERO-911]

I FOUND NOTHING

[crimzon red]

hmmm, this certainly is very fishy, i thought to myself as i walked home

Up to my room i went, i put aside my fear, put on my hat and coat, got out my magnifying lense,

and set forward to solve this mystery Serlok Hlmes style

let me look for clues

..................



*

[hiphat]

sorry crimson i completed it another way

i went back to my my house and again i entered my room and closed the door behind me
again i felt there is something behind me ......i looked behind but.....nothing
suddenly...i heard again a strange sound coming out of my closet....but this time there was a difference
i felt there was a shadow moving behind me.....yeah...i am sure.....i saw a part of it from the side of my eye
oh my god ..oh my god....what can i do? the sound is getting louder and louder......the shadow is getting darker and darker
i rushed towards the door....oh gosh....it's locked.....i got crazy....no way out
finally after alot of effort i tried to pluck up my courage and look behind
and....my blood ran cold ....coz what i saw was extreeeeeeeeeeeemly
horrible

[tikaaa]

if he kissed the ugly girl
then the cop slapped him told him " are you BLIND " :D
bas why kiss ya3ny ... maa 3alinaa
but if he kissed the pretty
then the ugly girl slapped the cop " watch your mouth " :D

[tikaaa]

:eek: :(
I missed looooooooooong part
sorry

[tikaaa]

It's nice but i cant catch u guys :(

[HERO-911]

if u wannawrite a comment please write it after writing the part that u like to add
&
i ask from every one to continue
thanx

[HERO-911]

i saw OSCAR
BUT...V

[hiphat]

But......no No He Wasn't Oscar......coz He Was Fierce .....very Fierce With The Sharp Teeth Sticking Out Of His Mouth.......he Was A Huge Creature.....he Got Closer And Closer................opps...what Can I Do..........i Screeeeeeeeeeeeemed

[HERO-911]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

then i found my brother shaking me & saying"hey you,wake up brother"......v

it was a dream..................v

[hiphat]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no hero........i don't like such ends at all.......... :5headache .i wish we wrote a real story that is exciting and that the reader can feel ......any way....i hope we'll do that someday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[HERO-911]

let's continue anyway...........v

[HERO-911]

or let's start a new one........ok
??

[hiphat]

ok no way you start a new story و الأمر لله

[HERO-911]

one day i was walking in my street then
........................

[mohammed2050]

I went to the caffe to have a cup of tea but............................................v

[tikaaa]

but I find it closed then .................................................. .I

[خالد لاشين]

............i was thinking that go to cinema to watch new movie "Dream of our life" i hear it realy nice,But

[tikaaa]

.............. But I find it complete either , then I thoughts its not my luck day , I decide to gonna home and attend my room never goin' out .....

[crimzon red]

Something didn't feel quite right, but i just could not put my finger on it.
It suddenly hit me, Where is everyone?!!!! why are the streets so empty
?????

[tikaaa]

and I wondered ......what about my life ???!!!!! ........... then i discovered how my life so empty
while i think about that something happened.................a

[خالد لاشين]

i cant thinking ,iam ...ohh god i'll faint on me ,anybody help me plzzzzz

[HERO-911]

i'll lost my balance
but before that i saw some one........................and

[tikaaa]

................................&...............................

[tikaaa]

sorry hero :( am not realize ur writing :(

[tikaaa]

and I shout to him shaking my hands " Heeeeeeee.........eeeeeeee..............yyyyy " oh my god my voice rattle in the throat
its not my luck day ever .........a

[HERO-911]

wala yhmak ana 3adellt feha b3d eznak ya3ny

& i saw him moving away....away...& he disappered
but there is hope
always........there is hope

[tikaaa]

ty ya Hero ... we 5od ra7tak el kesah kesetak


and it happened the precursor of the hope coming true , I saw a vision fast vision coming from a far distance ...... it's a car ...........So

[HERO-911]

let's write a new story
any one want to begin

[fire_scorpion]

and they put me in jail

[HERO-911]

(who's they...what ever)
then i said go to the hell

[momo_v9v]

suddenly some one tried to annoy her ... so i said hey go away

[kpaka_2006]

but he didnt care about me ,then i decide to.......